Rituals trouble

I'm having trouble with my new character. For starters, she's a ghoul. The issue isn't what she is but the frequency. I think I've exhausted the issue of ghouls extensively, even to the point that I changed one character from a ghoul to a human. The real issue is that I discovered a wealth of knowledge on strange rituals and I don't want to tie too much to the ghoul species.

Let me explain better: I don't want this story to focus on ghouls. There is a wealth of species in Lovecraft's world that begs to be unearthed. Most people use Cthulhu as a prop and call it a day. I'm diving into the obscure corners of his world. Right now, I'm dealing with rituals. Lovecraft's tales often mention dark, nameless rituals and leave it to the reader's imagination. I wish to describe SOME of the rituals. For that to happen, I need a character tied to it. For example, I have only one Deep One character and that seemed like enough to explore that aspect. I now have five types of ghouls with at least ten characters filled out between them. My world is spread too thin. I need to consolidate a bit. I'll drop the ghoul bit for the character. 

The other issue is why she wants to perform these rites and rituals. What does she gain by doing these dark things? Or is she unaware of the danger that is present? So much to consider.

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